I was a pupil at Yaldhurst Model School and this blog is where I shared my learning.
Laura, well done with the variety of poems you have written. A lot of them are very cleverly rhymed at the end of the lines. A next step could be to grab the audience’s attention with interesting words to start each line.
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Laura, well done with the variety of poems you have written. A lot of them are very cleverly rhymed at the end of the lines. A next step could be to grab the audience’s attention with interesting words to start each line.
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