This week for the 100WC the prompt was:
Wide, Orange, Crocodile, Within, Collapsed
With my 100WC I searched up some facts about Australian Crocodiles. I learnt some interesting facts about how Australian Saltwater Crocodiles are by far the most dangerous animals in Australia.
Here is my 100WC for this week, feel free to comment.
I was travelling around Australia, reptiles crawling and haunting the rivers. I came across a gigantic crocodile, it’s wide mouth opened and collapsed when a school of fish swam past his long body. Within the distance between the crocodile and I, I could easily be attacked.
I ran as fast as I could. All the way back to my van. I was hot but nothing was going to stop me getting to safety.
I got that feeling that the crocodile was chasing after me. The sky was transitioning colours, as I turned what I saw was a beautiful orange sky.
Hi Laura, really really love your story!
ReplyDeleteWish: Maybe just try to use more full stops.
Really good story well done!
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This is a great read. I like how you have managed to capture my attention with the weaving together of the required words into a captivating story. Have you ever seen a crocodile in real life? I have and they are jolly scary. Keep up the great writing.
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Hi Laura! I liked your post a lot! I liked the way you used the 5 words in your story! Keep up the good work!
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