tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2824512628858993256.post2517689048702399196..comments2018-08-27T09:42:23.910+12:00Comments on Laura: The OceanMakerBlog Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10961887121472987082noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2824512628858993256.post-82437882191625955102018-08-27T09:42:23.910+12:002018-08-27T09:42:23.910+12:00love it lauralove it lauraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2824512628858993256.post-74043117830788935322018-05-23T10:40:49.899+12:002018-05-23T10:40:49.899+12:00Hi Laura my name is adelaide and I am from wigram ...Hi Laura my name is adelaide and I am from wigram primary school.I love your wrting and the story.Maybe net time you can tell people what a narritive is because i don't know what a narritive is but other then that I love it.Adelaidehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10177708228004405643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2824512628858993256.post-44903166668685232942017-11-15T13:23:54.566+13:002017-11-15T13:23:54.566+13:00Hi Jazmine,
Thank you for your positive comment! T...Hi Jazmine,<br />Thank you for your positive comment! This story is fake. I have seen the movie; we actually all watched it as a class and then wrote our own version of it. Do you have any ideas of what I could do to make it better?<br /><br />LauraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2824512628858993256.post-76962323958910438352017-11-15T13:20:29.563+13:002017-11-15T13:20:29.563+13:00Hi Ruby,
Thank you for your positive comment!
I wi...Hi Ruby,<br />Thank you for your positive comment!<br />I will use your feedback to make my blog posts better. Did you have a favourite part of my story?<br /><br />LauraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2824512628858993256.post-8929761604273436662017-11-10T09:38:56.120+13:002017-11-10T09:38:56.120+13:00Kia Ora Laura my name is Jazmine and I am from Gre...Kia Ora Laura my name is Jazmine and I am from Greymain School in Mamaku Hub.<br />I like the way you put the short film of The Ocean Maker it looks really interesting to watch. I like the story that you have written. Is the story fake or real? Have you seen the movie The Ocean Maker or not? I like the way you have put a lot of information into this blog post and the way you write that story. I was a bit scared when I was reading the story!<br />By Jazmine.Jazminehttp://jazmines102015.blogspot.co.nz/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2824512628858993256.post-85170744610256842892017-11-10T09:35:06.464+13:002017-11-10T09:35:06.464+13:00Kia Ora Laura it is Ruby from Mamaku 1 at Greymain...Kia Ora Laura it is Ruby from Mamaku 1 at Greymain school, <br />I really like how you had filled the story with detail and then left it on a cliffhanger so others could write about what they think will happen next. Maybe Next time you could add some more punctuation and maybe a picture. <br />Kai Pai <br />From Ruby Ruby https://www.blogger.com/profile/17910741719736256328noreply@blogger.com